Yeah it needs work, Clean up the language.. Its a start....................[img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-disgusted.gif[/img]

 

I got as far as "hey,watup" and clicked out. If I want to hear ghetto wannabe urban gangsta talk, I'll get in my truck, and drive 30 miles south.

 

Its a start...Your mail links didn't work with my browser. It looks to me as if you're missing the "mailto:" command e.g. <a href="mailto:supraman60@aol.com">. Also it is typically a good idea to create multipage websites instead of dumping all the data on the first page (unorganized and lengthy download times if on dialup connection). Logically separate the categories that may exist within your page such as a bio section, a rides section, etc. Last but not least, the intent of a website is to have people actually browse through it. If there is offensive material the chances are your site will not be revisited.
There are endless tutorials on the web dealing with web design.

 

Pretty boring. It took me a entire elapsed time of 30 seconds go browse the entire site. Get more pictures and more information. And the slag and childish typing style is really stupid. Maybe get some videos also. Everyone likes videos [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-smile.gif[/img]

-Nick

 

thanks but thier really is no foul language on my new one.. check that one out... the first was horrible i made njatv.8m.com check it out!

 

This is the website I was reflecting on. I didn't see the first one. Not much to do on the site, and I agree with 87Banshee250sx about the slang terms and profanity. You should have more than just a couple of bios about your friends, because most people on here wont care you these people are.




Check under random pictures taken.
Hope this helps.