farthest wheelie
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farthest wheelie
smity, learn to type long hand, punctuate, and captialize once and a while. I don't want to rag on the spelling, I can't spell to well myself, but I have a dictionary. You is you not u. Maybe someone will take your post a little more serious. If you can't learn in school, or at home try to learn here.
Oh, and I never wheelie on purpose, just out of necessity. [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]
Oh, and I never wheelie on purpose, just out of necessity. [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]
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farthest wheelie
Originally posted by: Tin
smity, learn to type long hand, punctuate, and captialize once and a while. I don't want to rag on the spelling, I can't spell to well myself, but I have a dictionary. You is you not u. Maybe someone will take your post a little more serious. If you can't learn in school, or at home try to learn here.
Oh, and I never wheelie on purpose, just out of necessity. [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]
smity, learn to type long hand, punctuate, and captialize once and a while. I don't want to rag on the spelling, I can't spell to well myself, but I have a dictionary. You is you not u. Maybe someone will take your post a little more serious. If you can't learn in school, or at home try to learn here.
Oh, and I never wheelie on purpose, just out of necessity. [img]i/expressions/face-icon-small-happy.gif[/img]
1. (first sentence) The phrase should be "once IN a while" not "once and a while."
2. (second sentence) You need a coordinating conjunction after the word "spelling", othewise it is a comma splice. "But I have a dictionary," should have been left out completely or stated in another sentence.
3. I'm not going to even attempt to correct sentence Three.
4. The last sentence makes no sence at all. I think you should use that outstanding dictionary, that you speak so highly about, to look up the definitions of the words "purpose" and "necessity."
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